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Emote - Epic Fail

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Owned xP
Thanks for the idea, ~Solarlink x)

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[Owned xP
Merci pour l'idée, ~Solarlink x)]

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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

When I saw this in my inbox I instantly thought it was adorable, the poor little guy! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/g/g…" width="17" height="15" alt=":giggle:" title="Giggle - :giggle:"/>

I love the way you've added the little grey lines to emphasise the flying, and his facial expression fits the situation really well. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile) - :)"/>

I also saw a couple of things that maybe could be edited or added a little to make this emote even better than it is now.

The first thing would be to maybe make the emote get up and walk behind the wall, with the wall maybe going out of the frame too, having a slight delay and then making the emote loop into the flying frames. That way it would add a bit more of a loop to the emote, rather than having him slide down and then restart. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile) - :)"/>

The next thing would be to maybe mess with the wall a little when he hits it. Maybe make the wall shake a little, and add tiny cracks when the emote hits it. That way it'll make the bang look a lot more powerful! It's not crucial, though, just a suggestion. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/g/g…" width="17" height="15" alt=":giggle:" title="Giggle - :giggle:"/>

Overall I think this is a really great emote with a smooth animation and a humorous story, keep up the great work!